Question

11．請根據(jù)以下提示，并結合具體事例，用英語寫一篇短文．
In English，there is a proverb"Promise is debt．"That is to say，a promise cannot be taken back once it is made．
注意：①無須寫標題；
②除詩歌外，文體不限；
③內容必須結合你生活中的具體事例；
④文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；
⑤詞數(shù)不少于120，如引用提示語則不計入總詞數(shù)．

Answer 1

分析 本篇作文提示意思為，有一則英語諺語叫做，承諾就是債務．這就是說，一旦做出承諾就不能收回．因此考生的寫作話題應該是承諾，或誠信的重要性．注意使用生活中的事例，采用過去時或者現(xiàn)在時．寫作時為了語言的連貫應該恰當使用連接詞和插入語，還有高級詞匯和句式的使用．
重要短語：
What's worse更糟的是，in return，作為回報，
高分句子：
1．There is no doubt that everybody makes promises all his life．本句中含有重要句式，There is no doubt that 毫無疑問的是．
2．Therefore，I think what is said can never be what is unsaid．本句中what is said 做主語，what is unsaid做賓語．
3．Only in this way can you be reliable．此句為only引導的條件狀語從句，主句要倒裝．

解答 There is no doubt that everybody makes promises all his life．（高分句型）But just as the proverb goes，"promise is debt"．Once you have made a promise，you must keep it； otherwise，you won't be worthy of good faith．What's worse，you will lose your friends and even fame．（點明中心）
    Take myself for example．One day when playing with my good friend Xiao Ming，I saw a beautiful bird flying in the sky．Liking it so much，I asked Xiao Ming to draw it for me and I would give him my doll in return．But after he finished the drawing，I broke my word and refused to give him the doll because I liked it so much too．Since then，I have lost my good friend．（舉出事例）
　Therefore，I think what is said can never be what is unsaid．（高分句型）It is necessary and important to for you to think it twice before making a promise．Once you have made it，no matter what happens to you，you should keep to it．Only in this way can you be reliable，which will help you make a friend indeed and establish a good fame．（高分句型）

點評 對于開放式作文，考生寫作時，可以選取能運用熟悉的英語詞匯、句型的點進行展開，對于沒有把握的地方，要靈活變通；要盡量運用多樣化的句式，注意長短句的結合、簡單句和復合句的結合；要注意上下文的銜接，過渡要自然；還要注意書寫規(guī)范，做到卷面干凈，字跡清晰．