Question

假如你是中學生李華。在一位名叫WolfDad的學生家長的博客上，你看到如下內容。請你根據博客內容、寫作要點和要求，給這位家長回復。

I’m the father of a fourteen-year-old boy. I have a rule for my son: be among the top 3 students or get punished in one way or another. He has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on him. Am I wrong?

寫作要點：1. 表明自己的看法；

2. 陳述自己的理由（可舉例說明）；

3. 提出至少兩條建議。

寫作要求：1. 短文字數不少于120（不含已寫好的部分）；

2. 內容充實，結構完整，語意連貫；   3. 書寫須清晰、工整。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

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Hi, WolfDad,

What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for parents in China. My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.

Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission, health and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.

So I suggest that you take your friends’ advice. More importantly, let him live like a lovely boy; let him have more friends and social activities; and let him make mistakes of his own as we teenagers often do.

【解析】本文是一篇博客的回復，這對于學生來說可能有點陌生。但所寫的內容跟學生很貼近，很多學生可能也經歷了相似的事情，可以想象對自己的父母說出自己的心里話。說出懲罰對學生的帶來的影響。最后一定要提出自己的建議。