Question

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Last week I went to visit to my former neighbor, Mr. Yang. He and I used to living next to each other for many years. About half a year ago, an order came which the old building, along with many other similar ones, were going to be pulled down to make room for a main street.

So I had to move apart. Mr. Yang now lives in the suburbs near a beautiful park. His new apartment is much big than before. The only problem is that it took quite a long time to get to the downtown area. Therefore, Mr. Yang doesn’t seem to worry about the long distance. He says that new subway line is to be built in a few year and he is sure life will be better in the future.

Answer 1

【答案】

【解析】本文主要講了上周，作者去拜訪自己以前的鄰居的故事。

1.第一處：去掉第二個(gè)to visit作＂拜訪，訪問(wèn)＂ 講時(shí)，是及物動(dòng)詞。

2.第二處：living→ live used to do sth.意思是＂曾經(jīng)做某事（但現(xiàn)在停止）＂ ；注意區(qū)分be used to (doing) sth.該短語(yǔ)意思是＂習(xí)慣于（做）某事＂。

3.第三處：which→ that that引導(dǎo)同位語(yǔ)從句，說(shuō)明an order的內(nèi)容。

4.第四處：were→ was 在從句中，主語(yǔ)the old building是單數(shù)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞仍用單數(shù)。注意along with不是并列連詞，所以它引導(dǎo)的短語(yǔ)不能被看作并列成分。

5.第五處：I→ We 人稱代詞的邏輯錯(cuò)誤。根據(jù)語(yǔ)境，這里指我們（我和住了多年的鄰居）分開(kāi)了。

6.第六處：big→ bigger than before提示上文應(yīng)使用比較級(jí)。

7.第七處：took→ takes ＂去市區(qū)要花費(fèi)相當(dāng)長(zhǎng)的時(shí)間＂是楊先生的現(xiàn)狀，故表語(yǔ)從句也要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

8.第八處：Therefore→ However 根據(jù)語(yǔ)境，上下文之間構(gòu)成轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，并非因果關(guān)系，故應(yīng)改為副詞however。注意連詞but通常不用逗號(hào)隔開(kāi)。

9.第九處：that后加a new subway line前需加不定冠詞a，泛指＂一條新的地鐵線＂。

10.第十處：year→ years a few（一些）修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)。