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4．為了培養和增強學生的文物保護意識，學校特請來省文物專家為同學們作有關文物的報告．請將此事寫一個書面通知，告訴全校同學，內容要點如下：
報告主題：如何辨認和保護文物．
報告人：沈立教授
報告時間：星期五下午2：00-4：00
報告地點：學校報告廳
注意事項：帶筆記本，以班為單位排隊入場、就座
組織者：校學生會
通知時間：12月19日
注意：①詞數100左右
②生詞：辨認   identify    學生會   The Student Union
NoticeDecember 19
To offer the students'some knowledge on cultural relics，a lecture will be given by Prof．Shen Li at 2：00 this Friday afternoon．（高分句型一）In this lecture，Mr．Shen Li will talk about something about how to identify cultural relics and how to protect them．This is a good chance for students to learn something about that，so all the students are required to attend the lecture．（高分句型二）You are expected to line up first at 1：30 p．m．and then enter the hall，where the lecture will be held，and take your seats by the unit of class．（高分句型三）The lecture will start at 2：00 p．m．and ends at 4：00 p．m．Bring your notebooks with you．Be sure．
The Student Union．

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分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息為了培養和增強學生的文物保護意識，學校特請來省文物專家為同學們作有關文物的報告．請將此事寫一個書面通知，告訴全校同學，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：報告主題：如何辨認和保護文物．報告人：沈立教授   報告時間：星期五下午2：00-4：00    報告地點：學校報告廳     注意事項：帶筆記本，以班為單位排隊入場、就座        組織者：校學生會          通知時間：12月19日  2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：cultural relics文化遺產；attend the lecture聽演講；line up排隊；take your seats就坐；
 To offer the students'some knowledge on cultural relics，a lecture will be given by Prof．Shen Li at 2：00 this Friday afternoon．（高分句型一）
This is a good chance for students to learn something about that，so all the students are required to attend the lecture．（高分句型二）
You are expected to line up first at 1：30 p．m．and then enter the hall，where the lecture will be held，and take your seats by the unit of class．（高分句型三）

解答 Notice
                                                                                                                              December 19
        To offer the students'some knowledge on cultural relics，a lecture will be given by Prof．Shen Li at 2：00 this Friday afternoon．（高分句型一）In this lecture，Mr．Shen Li will talk about something about how to identify cultural relics and how to protect them．This is a good chance for students to learn something about that，so all the students are required to attend the lecture．（高分句型二）You are expected to line up first at 1：30 p．m．and then enter the hall，where the lecture will be held，and take your seats by the unit of class．（高分句型三）The lecture will start at 2：00 p．m．and ends at 4：00 p．m．Bring your notebooks with you．Be sure．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            The Student Union

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．