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15．運動會、文藝節、春游、志愿者服務…豐富多彩的校園活動使我們在緊張的學習之余盡情釋放潛能，展示特長，實現自我發展．請用英語寫一篇100-120詞的短文，具體描述你參與過的一次校園活動，并簡要談談你對該活動的看法或它對你的影響．
Last semester there was an English Speaking Contest，which of course，would be a perfect chancefor meto stand out．Ipicked up my courage and decided to give it a try．During the following days，Ispent every minute available polishing the speech script and rehearsing ittime and again．
The day finally came and I was on the stage，smile on face．Naturally，I felt a bit nervous and my speech was not fluent at first．But once that awkwardness was over，Iquickly regained my calmness and my speechflowed on．How proud and excited I was whenthe sound of applause rose in every corner of the auditorium．
Through the very experience，Irealized that chances favor those who are well prepared．Consequently，Iwill better equip myself for the coming challenges in my life．．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據關鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡3． 準確定位人稱、時態．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
During the following days，I spent every minute available polishing the speech script and rehearsing it time and again．
在接下來的幾天里，我花了每一分鐘一次又一次的拋光和彩排演講稿．
高分句型二：
How proud and excited I was when the sound of applause rose in every corner of the auditorium．
我是多么驕傲和興奮當喝彩聲中響起在禮堂里的每一個角落．

解答 Last semester there was an English Speaking Contest，which of course，would be a perfect chance for me to stand out．I picked up my courage and decided to give it a try．During the following days，I spent every minute available polishing the speech script and rehearsing it time and again（高分句型一）．
The day finally came and I was on the stage，smile on face．Naturally，I felt a bit nervous and my speech was not fluent at first．But once that awkwardness was over，I quickly regained my calmness and my speech flowed on．How proud and excited I was when the sound of applause rose in every corner of the auditorium（高分句型二）．
Through the very experience，I realized that chances favor those who are well prepared．Consequently，I will better equip myself for the coming challenges in my life．

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎進行思維和聯想，自由發揮．不僅考查學生在內容、結構安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學生的想像力、發散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．