Question

第三部分寫作(共兩節,35分)

第一節短文改錯(10分) (2013 •陜西)

下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地 方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。

增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(A ) ,并在其下面寫 上該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\) 劃掉。

修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后 的詞。

注意:1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不 計分。

   My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.

   One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived,so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour,I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up,and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally,there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute,my grandfather also caught a fish.

Felt hungry,we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.

Answer 1

1. 第二句go改為went解析：由時間狀語 one Sunday morning以及本篇文章的時態可

知用一般過去時。

2. 第三句ours改為our解析：形容詞性物主 代詞作定語，修飾fishing poles。

3. 第四句去掉so解析：從屬連詞as soon as 與并列連詞so不能同時使用。

4. 第五句Before改為After 解析：由句意 可知。

5. 第五句 impatiently 改為 impatient 解析:get

是系動詞，后接形容詞作表語。

6. 第六句and改為but 解析：表示轉折， 用 but。

7. 第七句were改為was解析：主語是a sudden pull , 謂語用單數形式。

8. 第七句and后加a解析：此處表示“一條 魚”，用 a fish。

9. 第八句minute改為minutes 解析：few修飾可數名詞復數。

10. 第九句Felt改為Feeling解析:feel與yve是主謂關系，因此用現在分詞作狀語。