Question

假設你是新華中學的高三學生李華，你校打算邀請阿里巴巴首席執行官馬云來學校做一次畢業典禮演講，請你給馬首席寫一封邀請信。內容包括：

1.說明寫信的目的；

2.說明演講的具體安排-----時間：5月30日；地點：學校操場;

主題：怎樣通過個人奮斗實現人生理想；

3.表達感謝與祝福。

注意：1.詞數100左右，開頭結尾已給出，不計入總詞數；

2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

3.參考詞匯：畢業典禮演講 commencement speech

Dear Mayun, CEO of Ali Baba,

My name is Li Hua. I’m a Senior 3 student from Xinhua Middle School.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mayun, CEO of Ali Baba,

My name is Li Hua. I’m a Senior 3 student from Xinhua Middle School. I am writing to ask you a favor. Would you please come to our school and give us a commencement speech? The speech is scheduled to be given on May 30th on the school playground ,the theme of which will be how to realize our dreams through personal efforts. We are eager to hear you talk about your own experiences and unique views.

I sincerely hope you can take time out of your busy schedule, and I would appreciate it very much if you could come. Thank you in advance and wish you all the best!

I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇典型的書信類應用文寫作。考生在寫作時要注意目的明確、條理清楚。英文書信一般由以下六部分組成：信頭、信內地址、稱呼、正文、結尾、簽名。題目已給定大致的格式，另外還要注意結合主題。

本文開篇就用了一個好的短語ask you a favor，請您幫個忙，避免了使用常用詞help；第三句的祈使句Would you please顯得謙和有禮；第四句中使用了定語從句the theme of which will be how to realize our dreams through personal efforts，which代替the speech，使得句式非常靈活多變，不會顯得千篇一律；第五句中短語be eager to的使用也非常恰當；第六句I would appreciate it if you could come，虛擬語氣用在這里表示禮貌，客氣；第七句中的in advance（提前）也用的非常好。最后一段使用了look forward to（期待）和at your earliest convenience（在您方便時）顯示了較好的英語功底，使得整個書信格式完整而禮貌。

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