Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿分25分）
學(xué)校英語(yǔ)角準(zhǔn)備就Living in the city 為主題，進(jìn)行有關(guān)城市生活利弊的討論，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格內(nèi)容提示，寫(xiě)一篇100字左右的短文。首句已給出，不要逐字翻譯，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

Advantages	Disadvantages
工作機(jī)會(huì)多	生活消費(fèi)高
交通便利	人口多、擁擠
有公園、飯店等休閑場(chǎng)所	空氣污染、居住環(huán)境差

 
Living in the city has both advantages and disadvantages… _____________________________
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Answer 1

Living in the city has both advantages and disadvantages. It is often easier to find jobs. There are always many choices of public transport. Besides, there are a lot of interesting things to do and places to see. You can eat at good restaurants, visit museums, go to cinemas and go to parks whenever you want to relax.
However, living in the city is often very expensive. You must find a well paid job, otherwise, you will not be able to afford the things you will do. What’s more, the city is always crowded, noisy and polluted. It is very difficult to find a good place where people can enjoy peace and fresh air as in the countryside.

試題分析：本篇寫(xiě)作題材是社會(huì)現(xiàn)象的兩種不同觀點(diǎn)。主題Living in the city，進(jìn)行有關(guān)城市生活利弊的討論，這種文章一般層次比較清晰，四段：第一段為總述；第二段正方觀點(diǎn)及依據(jù)；第三段反方觀點(diǎn)及依據(jù)；第四段自己觀點(diǎn)。要注意的是1.在列舉雙方依據(jù)時(shí)要盡量使語(yǔ)言多樣化；2.自我觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)時(shí)要有正確的判斷，要有辯證的思維。一篇文章需要有正確的句子才能明了清晰的表達(dá)作者的意思。考生應(yīng)明白高考書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求的是將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)意思的能力。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：考生應(yīng)該用自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞、短語(yǔ)及句式，按一定的邏輯順序和意義層次完成短文，劃分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之間的發(fā)展和連貫。盡量使用不同長(zhǎng)度的句子，使句型多樣化。適當(dāng)使用連詞，使句子間的銜接自然流暢。