Question

【題目】假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。請根據以下四幅圖的先后順序，以“Go Beyond Yourself”為題，給校刊“英語角”寫一篇英文稿件，記述你刻苦訓練，成功通過體育測試長跑項目的過程。

注意：詞數不少于60。

提示詞：體育測試 Physical Fitness Test

Go Beyond Yourself

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Answer 1

【答案】Go Beyond Yourself

Last week, I successfully passed the Physical Fitness Test.

During a PE class one month ago, our teacher informed us that we would take the test on April 12th. Upon hearing the news, I felt my heart sink, wondering how rough the way ahead would be. However, I had to face it. Every day after school, I went to the playground and practiced the 1000-meter run, which was always a nightmare for me. Each time when my legs almost gave out and an inner voice lured me to give up, my teachers and classmates were always around me, comforting me and encouraging me. Their positive words and running figures pushed me forward.

Then finally came the test day. As the starting gun sounded for the race to begin, I called upon all my body’s strength and speed. I ran with purpose. After enduring the long run, I approached the finish line. Quickening my steps, I was confident and hopeful. The moment I rounded the last turn, I knew I had made it. After crossing the finish line, I was so overjoyed to see my cheering classmates. I received their celebratory high-fives proudly and tears of happiness streamed down my cheeks, as my teacher shook my hand.

From this experience, I have learned that I should face my fears bravely and appreciate those who are always willing to help me, making me a better person.

【解析】

這是一篇圖畫類作文。

第1步：根據提示可知，本篇為寫一篇記敘文；請根據以下四幅圖的先后順序，以“Go Beyond Yourself”為題，給校刊“英語角”寫一篇英文稿件，記述你刻苦訓練，成功通過體育測試長跑項目的過程。

第2步：根據寫作要求，確定關鍵詞（組），如：the Physical Fitness Test（體育測試），rough（艱苦），give out（筋疲力盡），lure（引誘）；figures（名人）；with purpose（決心；目的）；Quicken（加快）等。

第3步：根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態問題

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

本文內容完整，語言規范，語篇連貫，詞數適當。另外全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。