Question

11．近年來，各地媒體不斷推出各種選秀節目，電視選秀非常流行，同時不少年輕人，甚至高中生也參加了這類節目．請以"電視選秀節目（TV talent show）之利弊"為主題，用英文寫一篇120個詞左右的短文．要點如下：
1、簡述電視選秀節目的現狀；
2、你對選秀節目利弊的看法并說明你的理由．

Answer 1

分析 本文為利弊型作文，要求對電視選秀節目進行利弊分析，本文要點已給出但是要做適當的擴展，寫作內容包括：簡述電視選秀節目的現狀，選秀節目的利弊，自己對電視選秀節目的看法，注意使用連接詞，使作文內容連貫，注意寫作的時態．時態用一般現在時，人稱用第三人稱．
重要短語：
come up with想出，
grow in向里長
Meanwhile與此同時
attend these shows參加這些選秀
As far as I am concerned就自己而言
On the one hand一方面，On the other hand另一方面
Therefore因此
importance for one's對某人很重要
 
 高分句型：
1．With different media across China comingup with various shows，TV talent show has grown in popularity in recent years．
此句用了With的復合結構．with+賓語+現在分詞（賓語與賓補之間是主動關系）
　　如：Withwinter coming on，it's time tobuy warm clothes．
2．As far as I am concerned，TV talent show is like adouble-edged sword，which can do us both good and harm．
句中含有which引導的定語從句，which代替上文中所提到的TV talent show．
which指物，在定語從句中做主語或者賓語，做賓語時可省略
（1）Football is a game which is liked bymost boys．
（2）This is the pen （which） he boughtyesterday．

3．they can make easy money or becomefamous overnight，ignoring the fact of"No pains，no gains．
ignoring the fact of"No pains，no gains．現在分詞短語做狀語，作狀語分詞在意義上也可用作狀語，表示時間、原因、方式和伴隨情況等．
　Opening the drawer he took out a dictionary．他打開抽屜，拿出一本詞典．（=He opened the drawer and took…這兩個動作是一個接著一個）
  She stood there waiting for the bus．她站在那兒等公共汽車．（伴隨情況或方式）
No pains，no gains 譯為不勞不獲，此句為一句諺語．如：love me，love my dog譯為愛屋及烏

解答 With different media across China coming upwith various shows，TV talent show has grown in popularity in recent years．（高分句型）Meanwhile，it is not uncommon to see manyyoung people，even highschool students，attend theseshows．（電視選秀節目的現狀）
    As far as I am concerned，TV talent show is like a double-edged sword，which can do us both good and harm．（高分句型）On the one hand，these shows can provide preciousopportunities for the young to express themselves and to perform their talentsof singing，dancing andso on．On the otherhand，they may alsomislead the youth and make them believe that they can make easy money or becomefamous overnight，ignoring the fact of"No pains，no gains．"（高分句型）（我對電視選秀節目的看法）
    Therefore，it is of vital importance for us，especially young people and their parents，to think twice before attendingthem．（對此做出總結）

點評 這是一篇所給材料比較詳細的利弊類作文，我們要做的就是把這些內容用正確的英語表達出來，動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，同時要表達出自己的觀點，可適當的發揮，在寫作時要注意時態，人稱，固定詞組搭配，要注意語言的規范性，做到上下文聯系緊密，條理清楚，符合邏輯關系．