Question

你所在的班級將要舉辦一次主題為“What Can We Do for Our School?”的英語演講比賽。請寫一篇英語演講稿，要求從以下四方面中任選一至二個進行闡述，并舉例加以說明。

1.關心他人；

2.美化校園；

3.受護學校設施；

4.營造良好的學習氛圍。

注意：

1.不要在書面表達中出現所在學校的校名和本人姓名，否則本節判為零分；

2.詞數：100左右；

3.參考詞匯：

愛心――love and care;校園――campus; 設施――facilities; 氛圍――environment

4.開頭和結尾已經寫好，且不記入詞數。

Hello, everyone. It’s nice to speak about what we can do for our school, and I think each of us can do something.

Thank you for listening!

 

 

Answer 1

Hello，everyone. It’s nice to speak about what we can do for our school, and I think each of us can do something.

The first thing we can do is to make our campus more beautiful. Every one of us may plant a tree in the school, or organize a thorough cleaning on the campus. We can also form a good habit of putting the rubbish in the trashcan. Never forget to turn off the light or close the door. We should not leave the tap water running or waste any materials in the laboratory class.

If everyone does one thing for our school, I believe we will turn our school into a better place to study and live in.

Thank you for listening!

【思路點撥】

1．可按照四步法寫作。即：仔細審題à列出提綱à擴展成文à檢查修改。

2．審題時，主要應注意如下五審：（1） 一審要求。寫作前一定要認真閱讀相關的寫作要求；（2） 二審文體及格式，本文是一篇演講稿，寫作時要注意其格式；（3） 三審人稱。（4） 四審時態、語態。（5） 五審要點。

3．寫作時要用一些高級的單詞，短語。句式結構要靈活多變，不要單一，還要考慮是否可以用上一兩句名人名言或諺語。這樣可以使你的作文錦上添花！

【亮點回放】

1．文章格式正確、結構簡潔、清晰，內容詳略得當，符合寫作要求。文章中的時態、語態也準確無誤。

2．能夠恰倒好處地使用一些單詞以及短語，如organize a thorough cleaning, form a good habit of , turn off等。句式結構也較豐富，有祈使句、從句、It引導的相關句子等等。

3．結尾If everyone does one thing for our school, I believe we will turn our school into a better place to study and live in.簡短有力！升華了主題