Question

據報道，在4月20日四川廬山地震中一個名叫高詩琴的女孩身受重傷后，處于極度的痛苦之中。國際紅十字會(IRC)決定，每當她收到一封慰問信，就給她增加2美分的治療款。假如你是她的加拿大筆友Peter，為了幫助她，請你用英文給她寫一封慰問信，主要內容應包括
?自我簡介
?得知的情況
?表示鼓勵
?打算為她做什么
?祝她早日康復
注意：
1.信的格式已為你寫好。
2.信中不得出現你的真實情況。
3.詞數100左右。
4.請在答題卡上作答。
5.參考詞匯：bitter(痛苦)  overcome（克服） recover（康復）
Dear Gao Shiqin,
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Yours sincerely,
Peter

Answer 1

Dear Gao Shiqin,
I am Peter, your pen friend from Canada. I am very sorry to have heard of your present situation that you are so bitter after you got seriously injured in the earthquake. At present, IRC has decided that it will give you two cents when you receive a letter. That will offer you so much courage. I hope you will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty, no matter how hard it is. You are sure to make it. I will try my best to ask all my friends, schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you, which may help you. I do believe that you are brave enough to live on.
May you recover soon.

解析試題分析：考查應用文中的書信的寫作。同時也屬于提綱類作文，要點都已經給出，審題時注意本文使用一般現在時，描述要點時要全面不要有遺漏，運用合適的語法規則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用省略句，倒裝句和強調句型準確表述。亮點有I hope you will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty, no matter how hard it is.這句話里面有讓步狀語從句，還有I will try my best to ask all my friends, schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you, which may help you.這句話用了非限制性定語從句。
考點：考查提綱類短文寫作。
點評：提綱類短文的關鍵在于要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時注意謀篇布局的順序，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。