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【題目】假如你是李華，你校的聯(lián)誼學(xué)校——美國喬治中學(xué)要招聘一名學(xué)生外聯(lián)部長(zhǎng)，主要負(fù)責(zé)與其聯(lián)系和接待等工作。條件是英語水平高，能熟練操作計(jì)算機(jī)，熱心為兩校服務(wù)。請(qǐng)你據(jù)此寫一封自薦信。

參考詞匯：外聯(lián)部長(zhǎng)director of foreign liaison department

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100個(gè)左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Sir or Madam,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I have learned that your school is in need of a director of foreign liaison department. I would like you to consider me for the position,

I have a good command of English. In the past two years, I have been an editor for the English Paper in my school. I am familiar with computer operation and office softwares, which can help me work well. What’s more, I am always ready to help others and offer good services. I think I am competent for the job. I would appreciate it if I could have the opportunity to get the job.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本文是一封書信。假如你是李華，你校的聯(lián)誼學(xué)校——美國喬治中學(xué)要招聘一名學(xué)生外聯(lián)部長(zhǎng)，主要負(fù)責(zé)與其聯(lián)系和接待等工作。條件是英語水平高，能熟練操作計(jì)算機(jī)，熱心為兩校服務(wù)。請(qǐng)你據(jù)此寫一封自薦信。寫作時(shí)要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來。寫作時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用，同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文是一封書信，格式正確，內(nèi)容齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理，文中使用高級(jí)句子。I have learned that your school is in need of a director of foreign liaison department.運(yùn)用定語從句；In the past two years, I have been an editor for the English Paper in my school.運(yùn)用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)；增加文章的時(shí)態(tài)變化；I am familiar with computer operation and office softwares, which can help me work well.運(yùn)用定語從句；同時(shí)運(yùn)用很多連接詞如What's more等，I think I am competent for the job. I would appreciate it if I could have the opportunity to get the job.此句式為文章增色，顯得文章很有檔次。