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假定你是李華，在一個英文網絡論壇上，你看到一個名叫Grown-up的中學生發帖(post)尋求幫助，請根據帖子的內容、寫作要點和要求回帖。

Grown-up        Post at 20-05-2013  18:30                             1#

Hi, everyone,   I’m a Senior Grade Three student, and I am suffering from mental pressure these days, what should I do?  TOP

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寫作要點：
1. 告訴Grown-up心理壓力不可避免；      2. 告訴Grown-up心里壓力的危害；
3. 建議Grown-up應正確面對心理壓力；    4. 介紹你面對心里壓力時所采取的措施。
注意：
1. 詞數100左右。
2. 可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
3. 文章的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

Answer 1

Hi,Grown-up:
It’s a fact that we face more and more mental pressure in our life. In my opinion, everyone will meet some mental pressure in their life. But if it lasts along time, it may do harm to our body.
Whenever I meet pressure, I try to keep calm and think how to overcome it, sometimes it is very effective. When I’m stressed out, I listen to music or do some sports. After that, I often find that my moods become much better. If I can’t overcome it, I will turn to my parents, teachers or good friends.
To sum up, we should face pressure bravely and overcome it actively.
Hope my ideas work.

試題分析：本題為材料作文，在寫作之前要注意審題，一是要寫到哪些方面的內容，就本作文來說主要介紹四個方面的問題。二是作文的時態，從內容上來看，應該采用一般現在時。但在寫作時應該知道，這是在寫作文，故四個方面的問題不能逐個翻譯，要上下連貫，形成有機的整體。
三在形成句子時，文章要有亮點，使用高級的句型結構，使文章顯得語言不斷變幻。
【亮點說明】所給范文中有兩個顯著的閃光點，一是開頭所用主語從句恰到好處，使用了較復雜的句型結構。本句It’s a fact that we face more and more pressre in our life.是主語從句的典型例子，二是這篇文章緊扣題目要求，一語點破中心，例如第二自然段直接說明了所采取的措施。