Question

根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇有關(guān)南京的短文。字?jǐn)?shù)：110左右

1.南京，古稱金陵，位于中國(guó)東部，長(zhǎng)江橫貫東西。

2.占地面積6597平方公里(square kilometers)，總?cè)丝?00多萬(wàn)。

3．南京是一座有著悠久歷史的文化名城，曾是六朝古都，有很多文化遺跡。

4．在中國(guó)發(fā)展史上占有重要的地位。

5．第十屆全國(guó)運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)于今年10月在南京奧體中心成功舉辦。這是南京人的驕傲。有9900多名來(lái)自全國(guó)各地的運(yùn)動(dòng)員參加了40多個(gè)項(xiàng)目的比賽。奧體中心成為南京標(biāo)志性建筑之一。

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Answer 1

Possible sersion:

Nanjing, also called Jinling in ancient times(whose ancient name is Jinling), lies/is in the east of China. The Changjiang River flows through it from west to east. It has/covers an area of 6597 square kilometers with a total population of over 6 million.

Nanjing is a famous city with a long history and rich culture. It was once the capital of six dynasties. Therefore, it has many cultural relics. In a word, Nanjing has played a very important role/part in the development of China.

The Tenth National Games were held successfully in Nanjing Olympic Stadium this October, which is the pride of Nanjingers(the people in Nanjing). More than 9900 athletes from all parts of the country competed in over 40 events. And the Olympic Stadium has become one of the great symbolic buildings in Nanjing.

【解析】

試題分析：

題目要求根據(jù)中文提示并結(jié)合自身知識(shí)寫一篇關(guān)于南京的短文。要求110字左右。不要出現(xiàn)標(biāo)點(diǎn)和拼寫錯(cuò)誤，盡量保持卷面整潔，字體美觀，注意行文的連貫性。

亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：運(yùn)用了插入語(yǔ)also called Jinling in ancient times…定語(yǔ)從句which is the pride of Nanjingers……with結(jié)構(gòu)It has/covers an area of 6597 square kilometers with a total population of over 6 million。這些句子的使用提升了文章的檔次，同時(shí)也顯示較高的語(yǔ)法知識(shí)點(diǎn)使用能力；范文中使用Therefore, In a word, this October ，And加了文章的連貫性，使文章上下聯(lián)系緊密；范文中運(yùn)用了大量的高級(jí)詞匯如covers。“ It has/covers an area of 6597 square kilometers with a total population of over 6 million.在南京這片6597平方公里的土地上居住著6百多萬(wàn)人。”cultural relics文化遺產(chǎn)。整體拉高了作文層次。范文中使用了一些固定短語(yǔ): lies in， played a very important role/part in，be pride of，one of the great…等豐富了文章的內(nèi)容，使文章更加充實(shí)完整。

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