Question

假設你是李莉，一位18歲的女孩，英語成績非常突出，有兩年英語家教的經驗，現在是“愛心俱樂部”的成員。你認為志愿者工作能使人樹立自信，培養交往技能，鍛煉自己的能力。看到下面這則招聘信息，你愿意利用這次機會，為需要幫助的兒童做些事情；同時增長見識，了解社會。?

A Voluntary Activity?

in the Winter Vacation?

5 Volunteers?

Wanted?

as English Teachers?

at S.O.S.Children’s Village?

      Those who are interested in taking part in the activity,please send an email to studentunion@bjsz.cn before May 10,2009 explaining your past experiences and purposes for applying.?

                                                      Students’ Union

注意：1. 根據中英文提示完成下面的英文郵件，書信的格式要完整；

       2.可適當增加細節使行文連貫；?

       3.詞數120~150(開頭已給出，不計入總詞數)。

    參考詞匯：tutor(vt. & n.)家教；Loving Heart Club愛心俱樂部

Answer 1

Dear Students’ Union,?

    I have just read the ad on the school bulletin and the moment I saw it?

Dear Students’ Union,?

    I have just read the ad on the school bulletin and the moment I saw it I took an interest in becoming one of the volunteer English teachers of the five.Now I’m writing here to apply for this opportunity.?

    I am Li Li,a girl of 18.I have a good command of English and for two years I have been tutoring two school children in English. Presently,I work as a member of Loving

Heart Club in our school.Voluntary work has helped me build confidence and good communication skills.?

    In my opinion,being a volunteer teacher is obviously more than just teaching;furthermore, it is helpful to broaden our horizon and improve our understanding of the world.That’s why I’d like to take this opportunity and make the most of my special talents and interests.By helping those kids,I feel I can make a big difference to

their future and make a small contribution to society.?

  I’d appreciate it so much if you could possibly consider my application.I’m looking forward to your early reply.?

                                                           Yours sincerely,?                                    

Li Li

解析:

首先弄懂學生會的要求和“志愿者”要求，然后按照要求，寫出自己符合條件和個人優勢，注意過渡和分段。