Question

第六節：短文改錯（共1篇，10錯誤；滿分10分）

假如英語課上老師要求同學們交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。

  增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(/\)，并在其下面寫上該加的詞。

  刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

  修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

  注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞：

        2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

I have always quite irrationally prided myself for my good health, for I only occasionally had to take a day off the work when I have a cold. So I was quite offended by my doctor who, when we ran to each other in the street the other day, taking one look at me and told me that I was definite fat and that if I did not make effort to lose some weight, I could expect to have a heart attack very long. He added that, like many middle-aged man, I led an inactive life. It was true that I had been gotten fatter, but it was because I was getting older.

Answer 1

for→on/upon     had→have        去掉work前的the       to→into      taking→took

definite→definitely  effort前加an (或efforts)   very→before  man→men   gotten→getting