Question

4．下面短文中有10處語言錯誤．請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞．
      2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11除起）不計分．
Miss Li is our English teacher．One day when the first bell rang，the monitor stood up and said，"Our English teacher is going to have a operation today．It has not decided yet who will take his place．"The class all turned silently at his words．Just at this moment，Miss Li appears at the door．She looked tiring and pale．"I have asked the doctor to put off the operation till tomorrow because I don't want you to miss a single class．"she said at a low voice，"A new teacher will take my place and I hope you'll get on well with her．I'll return back as soon as I'm well．"Heard this，all of us were moved to tears．What a good teacher we have!

Answer 1

分析 李老師教我們英語，有一天，班長告訴我們英語老師病了，還沒決定誰來代替她的課，同學們都沉默了．就中那時，李老師出現在門口，她看起來有點疲憊，臉色蒼白．她小聲地說，她已經把手術推遲到明天了，因為她不想錯過一節課．新老師會來上課，希望我們相處融洽．她好一點就會回來．聽到她的話，我們都被感動得流淚，多好的老師啊！

解答 Miss Li is our English teacher．One day when the first bell rang，the monitor stood up and said，

"Our English teacher is going to have a operation today．It has not∧decided yet who will take his place．
                                                     an                                       加been                                  her           
"The class all turned silently at his words．Just at this moment，Miss Li appears at the door．
                              silent                                                                     appeared
She looked tiring and pale．"I have asked the doctor to put off the operation till tomorrow 
                 tired
because I don't want you to miss a single class．"she said at a low voice，
                                                                                    in
"A new teacher will take my place and I hope you'll get on well with her．I'll return back as soon as I'm well．"
                                                                                                                            去掉                     better
Heard this，all of us were moved to tears．What a good teacher we have!
Hearing
1．a改為an．句中operation是元音開頭的單詞，要用an．
2．加been．句意表達的是被動，這件事還沒有決定．
3．his改為her．邏輯指代錯誤，句意指代的是Miss Li，要用her來指代． 
4．silently改為silent．句中turn表示變得，是一個系動詞，后接形容詞作表語．
5．appears改為appeared．文章講述的是過去的一件事，要用一般過去時態． 
6．tiring改為tired．句中修飾的是人，要用過去分詞，現在分詞形式事物的特征．
7．at改為in．短語搭配，in a low voice小聲說話．  
8．back去掉．return表示就表示回來，back重復了．
9．well改為better．暗含比較，句意表達的是比現在好點． 
10．heard改為hearing．句中Hear和all of us構成主謂關系，要用表示主動的現在分詞．

點評 短文改錯題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎知識．常考的知識點有：名詞（單復數錯誤），動詞（時態，語態，搭配，轉換），代詞（指代錯誤），形容詞和副詞（轉換，比較等級），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會考查邏輯錯誤，如本來用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯誤；找錯誤要以動詞為主，動詞或與動詞有關的錯誤占了改錯的題的重要一部分．