Question

【題目】假如你是紅星中學高一（1）班學生李華，你的美國朋友Mike給你郵件說他將在今年暑假去Amsterdam旅游。請你給他回一封郵件，內容包括：

1.建議他租用自行車游覽該市；

2.說明該市為何被稱為“自行車之城”；

3.介紹公共自行車給該市帶來的益處。

注意：1. 詞數不少于60；

2. 可適當增加細節, 以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭和結尾已給出, 不計入總詞數。

Dear Mike，

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mike，

Glad to hear that you are going to visit Amsterdam. I just have learned a lot about Amsterdam in my English class. To fully enjoy this beautiful city, I think you can rent a public bike there.

Amsterdam is said to be the “City of Bikes” because of the convenience for bicycles. It is flat and therefore results in a really good city for bike riding. There are also plenty of places for bicycle parking and most streets in the city centre have a bicycle path. The “white bike” for public use has been popular for many years. Now the city has benefited a lot from the bikes. Both locals and tourists have been using the white bikes, so there is already less traffic in central Amsterdam. And people have been enjoying city centre streets without cars for many years.

I’m sure you will enjoy your trip on the bike. Have fun and do not forget to share your photos!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文為提綱類作文，按照出題者的要求針對Mike暑假去Amsterdam旅游這一情況回復郵件，給出一些建議。首先考生要簡單描述得知Mike暑假去Amsterdam旅游這一情況：Glad to hear that you are going to visit Amsterdam. 然后直接切入正題，也就是給出一些建議。文章的主要部分要將Amsterdam和“City of Bikes”緊密聯系起來。考生可以先描述“City of Bikes”這一稱號的由來，例如Amsterdam is said to be the “City of Bikes” because of the convenience for bicycles. 然后分部分詳細解釋。在介紹Amsterdam和bike之間的關系同時，就可以順其自然地提到自行車給這個城市帶來的好處，例如：Both locals and tourists have been using the white bikes, so there is already less traffic in central Amsterdam，并不需要另起一段單獨強調。