Question

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假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華，在3月12日植樹節(jié)（Tree-Planting Day）這一天，你和班里同學去郊區(qū)植樹。請根據以下圖畫內容，并以 “Green Action in Our Class”為題，給Teens 的Star Letter欄目寫一篇英文稿件，介紹你們的植樹活動，并談談自己的感想。

注意：1. 短文須包括所有圖畫內容；可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫;
2. 詞數100詞左右。
提示詞：郊區(qū)suburbs
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 

Answer 1

Green Action in Our Class
On March 12, the Tree-Planting Day, we had a meaningful experience, one I’ll never forget.
Early in the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately, some digging holes, some carrying and planting young trees，and others watering them. We had a wonderful teamwork! With all work done, we decided to put up a board to remind people to protect these trees. Before leaving, we took some photos to record our green action.
Tired but happy, we all went home with a sense of achievement. I feel it our duty to plant trees every year and I firmly believe if everyone plants a tree each year, our planet will become much more beautiful.

解析試題分析：本文的寫作首先總起句對3月12日所做的事情進行描寫，這是一次有意義的活動we had a meaningful experience，進而對第一幅圖進行描寫，我們騎單車去郊區(qū)植樹we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees，然后對第二幅圖的內容進行描寫，一些人挖坑，一些人植樹，其余的在澆水some digging holes, some carrying and planting young trees，and others watering them.在所有的事情做完后我們樹立了一個牌子，提醒人們保護這些樹木put up a board to remind people to protect these trees.最后一幅圖表示我們進行了拍照留念we took some photos to record our green action.最后再談一談自己的感想，盡管很累但都有一種成就感a sense of achievement.我堅信如果每個人都一年植一棵樹，那么我們的地球將會變得越來越美麗I firmly believe if everyone plants a tree each year, our planet will become much more beautiful.
考點：提綱類寫作
點評：本文的寫作不難，對于敘事類文體，對文章的條理性要把握好，在寫作過程注意使用“起承轉合”的詞語或是句型表達，多使用被動，倒裝、虛擬來提升作文的美度。在平時寫作時應該多進行閱讀，對閱讀過程中寫的好的表達要進行積累，并且學以致用，勤積累，多背誦，這樣才能作文才能穩(wěn)步的提升。