Question

17．假如你是即將畢業(yè)的高三學(xué)生李華．來你校進(jìn)行交流學(xué)習(xí)的澳大利亞學(xué)生Sam也將結(jié)束在中國的學(xué)習(xí)回國．分手之際，全班同學(xué)都在互致畢業(yè)留言．作為他的好朋友，請你根據(jù)下列提示用英語給他寫一份留言．
    1．感謝他在英語學(xué)習(xí)方面給你的幫助：
    2．回憶你們一起經(jīng)歷的一件事：
    3．表達(dá)良好祝愿．   
注意：1．詞數(shù)：120-150；開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
      2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Sam．
How time flies、I  Two years has passed before l realize it．________________________
Best wishes!
    Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文為提綱類的書信作文，要求就畢業(yè)之際對在中國留學(xué)兩年的Sam寫一封畢業(yè)留言信．要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出：感謝幫助、回憶往事以及表達(dá)祝愿，但具體的內(nèi)容要靠自己發(fā)揮，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運(yùn)用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出．難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級詞匯和固定短語準(zhǔn)確表述．審題時注意本文主要使用一般過去時，人稱以第一人稱為主．
重要短語：
shared sth together共享某事，assist sb with sth幫助某人某事，be filled with充滿，ride by汽車經(jīng)過，send sb/sth to sp將某人（某物）送到某地，in good condition狀況良好．
高分句型：
1．Well，I guess you remember the dog named Candy which we saved on the windy Sunday when we rode by an abandoned factory．本句中包含一個過去分詞短語named Candy作后置定語，修飾the dog，which引導(dǎo)的定語從句，后面還有一個when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句．
2．Discovering that she was badly injured，we sent her to the pet hospital immediately．這句為現(xiàn)在分詞短語作時間狀語，相當(dāng)于一個when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句when we discovered that she was badly injured．

解答 Dear Sam，
How time flies!Two years have passed before I realize it．Now，it's time to say goodbye．But happily still，we shared so many precious memories together．（寫信目的）
I was in a difficult situation learning English when you first arrived at our school．After knowing each other，you generously assisted me with my study in English，which improved my level greatly．My heart is still filled with appreciation．（表達(dá)感謝）
Well，I guess you remember the dog named Candy which we saved on the windy Sunday when we rode by an abandoned factory．（高分句型）Discovering that she was badly injured，we sent her to the pet hospital immediately．（高分句型）Thanks God．Candy is in good condition now，living in Ms Tian's home．（回憶往事）
Sam，whenever you come back，we all welcome．May you have a bright future．And best wishes．（表達(dá)愿望）
Yours sincerely，
 Li hua

點(diǎn)評 本文屬于書信類應(yīng)用文．本文在結(jié)構(gòu)上采用了經(jīng)典的四段式，符合電子郵件的寫作模式．書信的格式正確，文句通順，表達(dá)自然流暢，語言地道、規(guī)范．靈活的運(yùn)用了一些高級詞匯和固定短語準(zhǔn)確表述，其中包含了定語從句、狀語從句以及非謂語動詞的準(zhǔn)確適用都為本文增添了色彩，