Question

8．假設你是李津，日前參加了在加拿大舉行的為期四周的國際中學生生存訓練營活動，并將作為中國學生代表在閉幕式上發言．請你用英語寫一篇發言稿，要點如下：
（1）遇到的挑戰（語言、交往、文化差異）；
（2）你的收獲（日常生活上與學習上）
（3）感謝組織者
注意：
（1）詞數不少于120；
（2）請適當加入細節，使內容充實、行文連貫．
（3）開頭和結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數．
Dear friends，
I am honored to deliver a closing speech on behalf of all the Chinese students in the camp．
As we know，the camp is made up of thirty students from several countries．（高分句型一） Before I came to Canada，I had made careful preparations for this camp．However，I still experienced some unexpected challenges，such as the difficulty in making my self-understood，talking with strangers and dealing with culture shock．（高分句型二） With great patience and kindness，the organizers helped me out．The four weeks in the camp has changed me greatly．Not only did I improve my oral English，but I also made lifelong friendships．Most importantly，I became more confident．So now I would like to express my great thanks to all the people who contributed to the camp．（高分句型三）
That's all．Thank you for listening．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息日前參加了在加拿大舉行的為期四周的國際中學生生存訓練營活動，并將作為中國學生代表在閉幕式上發言．請你用英語寫一篇發言稿，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：（1）遇到的挑戰（語言、交往、文化差異）；（2）你的收獲（日常生活上與學習上）（3）感謝組織者 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態；就本文而言應該用一般現在時態．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：on behalf of代表；As we know眾所周知；However然而；deal with應對；help  out幫助某人度過難關；Not only，but also 不僅，而且；contribute to 致力于；
As we know，the camp is made up of thirty students from several countries．（高分句型一）
However，I still experienced some unexpected challenges，such as the difficulty in making my self-understood，talking with strangers and dealing with culture shock．（高分句型二）
So now I would like to express my great thanks to all the people who contributed to the camp．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear friends，
        I am honoured to deliver a closing speech on behalf of all the Chinese students in the camp．As we know，the camp is made up of thirty students from several countries．（高分句型一） Before I came to Canada，I had made careful preparations for this camp．However，I still experienced some unexpected challenges，such as the difficulty in making my self-understood，talking with strangers and dealing with culture shock．（高分句型二） With great patience and kindness，the organizers helped me out．The four weeks in the camp has changed me greatly．Not only did I improve my oral English，but I also made lifelong friendships．Most importantly，I became more confident．So now I would like to express my great thanks to all the people
who contributed to the camp．（高分句型三）
        That's all．Thank you for listening．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．