Question

18．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華．你班同學(xué)參加了學(xué)校的"地球日"系列活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)按照以下四幅圖的先后順序，以"Actions for a Greener Earth"為題，給校刊"英語角"寫一篇英文稿件，介紹活動(dòng)的全過程．
注意：詞數(shù)不少于60．
提示詞：地球日 Earth Day

Answer 1

分析 作文要求為一篇與環(huán)保相關(guān)的英文報(bào)道類稿件．主題是"Actions for a Greener Earth"．寫作時(shí)人稱主要為第三人稱為主，寫作時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去時(shí)為主．寫作要點(diǎn)：1，參加人員；2，時(shí)間；3，活動(dòng)內(nèi)容及成果；4，活動(dòng)意義．
重要短語及詞匯：
Earth Day 地球日
come up with 想到
used materials 廢棄材料
worn-out clothes 破舊衣物
give away 分發(fā)，派發(fā)
unexpected 意想不到的
be proud of…為…而感到驕傲
高分句型：
句型一
All were very happy with those unexpected gifts，especially little kids and elderly people．
especially 副詞，表示特別是…
句型二
We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school．
"so…that…"如此…以至于…，that引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句

解答 Actions for a Greener Earth
A week before Earth Day，posters were put up around our school，calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth．（時(shí)間，交代事件）
Our class came up with the idea of making better use of used materials．We brought to our classroom worn-out clothes，pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles and turned those into dolls，handbags，tissue boxes and small vases．That weekend，we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there．All were very happy with those unexpected gifts，especially little kids and elderly people．【高分句型一】We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school．【高分句型二】（活動(dòng)內(nèi)容及成果）
We are very proud of what we did at that weekend and believe we could do more for a better world．（活動(dòng)意義）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 圖畫類作文要求考生要認(rèn)真觀察圖片，了解故事的發(fā)展情節(jié)，理清事件發(fā)展的過程及意義．