Question

某英文報就近年來我國學生出國留學低齡化的利弊在報上展開討論，希望廣大讀者暢所欲言，就此事發表自己的看法。假設你是中學生李華，請用英語給編輯寫一封信，談談你的看法。既可以贊同，也可以反對，但必須說明理由。120字左右。

　　(注意：信的開頭已給出，字數不計算在內。)

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you about my opinion on Chinese students going abroad for further studies at an early age.

 

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Dear editor,

　　I'm writing to tell you my opinion on Chinese students going abroad for further studies at an early age.

　　I agree that Chinese students going to study abroad is a good thing, which helps us to know more about foreign countries, but I don't think it necessary for us to do that so early.

　　The education in China and that in foreign countries both have advantages and disadvantages. The most important thing for us Chinese students to do at present is to know our country, people and culture well. Without that, we'll have no root and cannot have a good understanding of other countries, people and cultures.

　　Besides, going to study in foreign countries at too early an age not only costs a lot of money, it could also bring serious problems. Taking care of themselves is one of them.

　　In my opinion, as primary or middle school students, we should devote our time to studying harder in our own country and improving ourselves, when the chance to study abroad arrives, we'll grasp it and make the best use

【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來. 動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮點說明】范文提到一些常用短語如at present目前 have a good understanding of  有某方面知識In my opinion  在我看來devote our time to 致力于 。I agree that Chinese students going to study abroad is a good thing, which helps us to know more about foreign countries, but I don't think it necessary for us to do that so early.這本句話中提到which引導非限制性定語從句，but引導的轉折句，think it adj for sb to do 認為某事對某人來說如何。The most important thing for us Chinese students to do at present is to know our country, people and culture well.這句話中to do 做表語。In my opinion, as primary or middle school students, we should devote our time to studying harder in our own country and improving ourselves,，and連接study 和improve并列，時態保持一致。本文還運用許多連詞如 besides when but 使文章連貫很強的邏輯性。

考點： 提綱類作文