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第二節(jié)：書面表達(dá)(滿分25分)
下面是21世紀(jì)報(bào)中學(xué)生版（21st Century School Edition）刊登的一封讀者來信，請(qǐng)你以編輯的身份給這位中學(xué)生寫封回信。
Dear editor,
I spend most of my time studying. I hardly talk to my classmates. Sometimes I don’t care much about others, but I do want to talk. I just don’t know what to talk about and how to begin a conversation.
I feel so lonely. How I wish I had a good friend! Could you give me some advice?
Yours,
Jin Jing
注意：1．回信的內(nèi)容要包括以下要點(diǎn)：
（1）要相信自己。你最大的問題是缺乏自信；
（2）微笑面對(duì)同學(xué)，讓他們相信你是友好的；
（3）先試著與一個(gè)和你同樣害羞的或和與你有同樣愛好的同學(xué)交談，可以問一些學(xué)習(xí)上的問題，談?wù)劰餐�的愛好�?br />（4）幫助學(xué)習(xí)和生活上有困難的同學(xué)。
2．詞數(shù)100左右。信的開頭已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
3．參考詞匯：自信self-confidence n.    缺乏: lack  vt.
Dear Jin Jing,
Your problem is a common one among middle school students. Maybe the following advice can help you.                                                                  
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Dear Jin Jing,
Your problem is a common one among middle school students. Maybe the following advice can help you. First of all, believe in yourself. Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence. The first thing you must do is to smile at your classmates. One smile speaks louder about your wish to make friends than any words. Your smile will show that you are friendly to them. Next, try talking with a student who is as shy as yourself or who shares the same interest as you. You can discuss your studies with a classmate, and you can also talk about your hobbies as well. If anyone is in trouble in life or study, you should be ready to help him or her. Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possible.
Yours, 

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