Question

請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇約100—120詞的短文，介紹你初中或高中生活中印象深刻的一位同桌。

Answer 1

Jane and I are good friends, though we look different on the outside. I am as slim as a rake while she is big and strong. Someone in our class once joked that she looked like a big talking snowball with two smiling tiny eyes. But Jane never takes any joke about her size seriously. She is kind and warm-hearted. She looked after me when I was ill. She lent me her notes when I was having trouble with math. She even taught me how to knit a sweater. The most impressive part about her is that although she is so big, she is quick and full of energy. You can often see her in the playground, either playing basketball or volleyball. Sometimes I make fun of her by saying. “You will make a fantastic goalkeeper.” She always replies with a wide laugh and a soft punch in my arm. I guess that is why she is everyone’s favorite in our class.

試題分析：本文屬于開(kāi)放性作文，要求你介紹一位初中或者高中給你留下深刻印象的同學(xué)，你可以以你身邊的一位同學(xué)為原形，展開(kāi)合理的想象，可以把別人的事情移植到他的身上。在謀篇布局的時(shí)候可以從生活方面，學(xué)習(xí)方面，對(duì)待父母和長(zhǎng)輩方面著手，做詳細(xì)地描述。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于開(kāi)放性作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真梳理要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。