Question

短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)。并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(﹨)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不記分。

　　Li Ming and I took part in a wilderness survival program yesterday, and it has been one of the most unforgettable experiences since high school．Early on the morning, we set out．Li Ming was carrying a compass and a tent in his backpack, but in my there was a flashlight, a map, a knife, a first-aid kit, some match, candles, food, and clothing．On the way to the campsite, we climbed a hill, and then we swim across a river, pushed the backpacks on a large piece of wood we had found by the river．

　　As we got into a forest, we missed our way．Lucky, we found the right direction with the compass．By the time we reached to the campsite, it was already dark．Li Ming then put up the tent, and I made a fire and started cooking．Then two of us spent the night in the forest．We learned to use knowledge gained in classroom training to solve problems．

　　It was quite an experience for me, which I'll never forget for the rest of my life．

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解析：

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