Question

6．假如你是李華，某中學高一學生，面對目前的學習壓力，想和父母說說知心話，請你用英語在你的博客上用書信的形式表達出來．要點如下：
1．感恩
2．期望：（1）．多交流，使自己保持良好心態 （2）．創造條件，給自己提供適時幫助
3．打算：考生自擬（至少寫兩點）
注意：
1．短文需包括所有內容要點，可適當發揮
2.100 字左右，開頭結尾已給出，不計人總詞數．
Dear Mom and Dad，
The mid-term examination is around the corner．On this special occasion，how I wish I could have a heart-to-heart talk with you．
                                                                
I'm quite confident of my future life and I do wish you good health and a happy life．
Yours ever．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇以書信的形式，表達高一學生，面對目前的學習壓力，想和父母說的知心話．根據題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現在時態．內容包括：一點明主題；二表示感恩，期望得到幫助；三自己的打算．
高分句型：
1．It will be a few months before I take the mid-term exam，which makes me under great pressure．句子里It will be a few months和 before引導的狀語從句，表示"過不了幾個月就…"；which 引導非限制性定語從句，代指主句．
過不了幾個月我就要期中考試了，這讓我壓力很大．
2．It is also necessary that I do some physical training once in a while so that I can keep fit．句子里It做形式主語，代指主語從句that I do some physical training once in a while；so that 引導目的狀語從句，表示"為了"．
為了保持健康，我有必要時常做身體鍛煉．

解答 Dear Mom and Dad，
      The mid-term examination is around the corner．On this special occasion，how I wish I could have a heart-to-heart talk with you．（點明主題）
Through those years of my growing up，I always feel grateful to you for your unselfish help，care and love for me．Thanks to your constant encouragement，I have been making progress in my studies．It will be a few months before I take the mid-term exam，which makes me under great pressure．【高分句型一】I need frequent support．As you know，good studying conditions and timely help will do me a lot of good．（表示感恩，期望得到幫助）
Mom and Dad，my dream is the very one you always have．I am fully aware of the responsibilities I am bearing．I plan to make a detailed study schedule for this coming examination so that I can review lessons and practice solving problems of different subjects．It is also necessary that I do some physical training once in a while so that I can keep fit【高分句型二】．If possible，as a family member，I will also help do some housework to make you relax a little bit．（自己的打算）
I'm quite confident of my future life and I do wish you good health and a happy life．

點評 考查提綱類作文．寫作的步驟：
第一步：審題，確定體裁格式、主體時態、中心人稱和內容要點，避免填表式或履歷表式表達．
第二步：擬定提綱，創造良好的開端；敘述得體，布局謀篇；巧妙過渡，完美結尾．
第三步：遣詞造句，套用句型，上下銜接，地道表達，行文成篇（注意"參考詞匯"的提示作用）．