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10．第一節短文改錯（共1小題；每小題10分，滿分10分）下面短文中有10處語言錯誤．請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞．增加：在缺詞處加一個漏洞符號（/\），并在其下面寫上該加的詞．刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞．注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
Senior three student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination．Should I choose a good major and a good university？Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested．It will also make it possibly for them to take their favorite jobs in the future．However，those who think differently believes that the environment is important to one's development．They also believe that students graduate from leading universities are often more likely to find a good job．In my opinion，the best choice is to choose a good major at a good university．But if we can obtain both，the first thing to consider is a good major，because no matter where we study，they can still achieve a lot in the certain field if we try our best．

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分析 本文作者主要針對已經考上大學的高三畢業生是選擇好專業還是選擇好大學的問題，在陳述了一些學生的不同觀點的同時，也表明了自己的看法，并說明了其中的原因．

解答 Senior threestudentwill face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination．
                  students                                                   去掉by 
Should I choose a good majoranda good university？Some students prefer to consider majors first
                                           or
so that they can learn what they are interested∧．It will also make it possibly for them to take their 
                                                                  in                                possible 
favorite jobs in the future．However，those who think differently believes that the environment is 
                                                                                                  believe
important to one's development．They also believe that students∧graduate from leading universities 
                                                                                           graduating或graduate前加who  
are often more likely to find a good job．In my opinion，the best choice is to choose a good major
at a good university．But if we can obtain both，the first thing to consider is a good major，
                                         can't或can后加not
because no matter where we study，theycan still achieve a lot in the certain field if we try our best．
                                                     we                                        a
答案：
1．把student改為students    考查名詞的單復數    此處指的是：面臨高考的高三的學生，故用復數名詞students
2．去掉by    考查介詞"pass by"意為：經過，路過；由于此處指的是：通過大學入學考試；pass在這里是及物動詞，故去掉by
3．把and改為or     考查連詞   本句的意思是：我應該選擇一個好專業呢，還是一所好大學？此處表示選擇，故用or
4．在interested之后加in    考查固定短語"be interested in"意為：對…感興趣；故在interested之后加in   
5．把possibly 改為possible    考查固定結構"make+it+形容詞+to do sth．"意為：使得…怎么樣；這里的意思是：這也將會使他們在未來從事他們最喜歡的工作成為可能；故用形容詞possible
6．把believes 改為believe    考查主謂一致     由于此處描述的考上大學的高三畢業生的通常的想法，故用一般現在時態；本句的主語"those who think differently"指的是：那些有不同想法的學生們；故用believe
7．把graduate改為graduating或graduate前加who   考查現在分詞或關系代詞    此處在句中作定語，修飾前面的名詞students，由于動詞graduate與其邏輯主語students構成了主謂關系；故這里可以用現在分詞graduating；另外，也可以將本句改為定語從句，由于先行詞students（指人），在從句中作主語，故用關系代詞who；故本題的答案為：把graduate改為graduating或graduate前加who  
8．把can改為can't或can后加not    考查情態動詞的否定形式    根據上一句可知，此處的意思是：如果這兩者（好的專業與好的大學）我們不能兼得，那么首先要考慮的應是一個好的專業；由于此處表達了否定的意義，故用情態動詞的否定形式；故答案為：把can改為can't或can后加not   
9．把they改為we    考查人稱的一致性    本句的意思是：因為無論我們在哪里學習，只要我們盡力，我們仍然可以在某一領域取得很多的成就；此處在句中作主語，指"我們"；故用we
10．把the改為a    考查不定冠詞    此處用來修飾單數名詞 field，表示泛指"某一領域"；故用a

點評 短文改錯是集語法知識與語言技能為一體的綜合性試題，主要考查學生對詞匯、語法和語篇三要素的把握能力．錯誤類型一般有：缺詞、多詞和錯詞．常見的錯誤有：1 詞法錯誤，主要包括動詞、名詞、冠詞、形容詞、副詞、代詞和介詞等詞類誤用、同義詞混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此類試題時，需要正確分析句子成分，熟練掌握各詞類的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常見句法錯誤．通常表現為簡單句、復合句以及疑問句、祈使句、感嘆句和強調句等錯誤．解答此類試題時，需要掌握各類句子的句式結構及意義用法．3 應在理解文章大意的前提下，進行作答．