Question

請根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。

Failure is the mother of success. What failure to us is what sunshine to the trees.

注意：①無須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語提示語；

②除詩歌外，文體不限；

③文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

④詞數(shù)為120左右。

 

Answer 1

As an old saying goes, failure is the mother of success. What failure to us is what sunshine to the trees, without which we cannot arrive at the place where we hope to go. Although failure is annoying, as long as we face it bravely, we will succeed sooner or later.

There was once a time when I had difficulty in math. However hard I tried, my math grade was still bad. Later, I failed to pass an important examination. Before I decided to give up, it was my math teacher who gave me a hand and told me that failure could also teach us a lesson. What she told me encouraged me to face with my math problem bravely. Knowing the importance of failure, I was not afraid of math. Finally, my math grades improved.

Taking my experience into conclusion, everyone can conquer the unavoidable failure in our life so long as we have faith in ourselves. Treasure the failure, and you will win the treasure.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文。Failure is the mother of success. What failure to us is what sunshine to the trees.就失敗乃成功之母為話題寫一篇作文。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。一定要給出自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型為文章潤色。注意要求的詞數(shù)120詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】What failure to us is what sunshine to the trees, without which we cannot arrive at the place where we hope to go.這里含有兩個定語從句；Before I decided to give up, it was my math teacher who gave me a hand and told me that failure could also teach us a lesson.這里含有一個定語從句和一個強(qiáng)調(diào)句。What she told me encouraged me to face with my math problem bravely.這里含有一個主語從句。

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