Question

3．某英 文報"讀者來信"專欄正在就高二學生家長是否應(yīng)該為孩子購置電腦這一話題開展討論．有贊同的也有反對的．請你以A reader為名給該報編輯寫一封英文信，發(fā)表你的觀點（或贊同或反對）．信的開頭已寫好．
注意：
1．下面的提示可能會幫助你構(gòu)思：
more information，improve English，learning software（學習軟件），enjoy oneself，computer games，short-sighted，wast e of money，fail the exams
2．你不必根據(jù)上面的提示逐條進行寫作，可自由發(fā)揮．
3．字數(shù)：90以上．
4．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實校名，姓名．
Dear editor，
I'm a student of Senior Two．                                                                                  
                                                                 A reader．

Answer 1

分析 本文是開放性作文，根據(jù)所給提示信息，針對這一現(xiàn)象發(fā)表看法，以此為話題進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮寫一封建議信，又屬于提綱作文．
在寫作時以第一人稱和第二人稱為主，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．
（高分句型一）Those who have computers in my class are spending too much time on computer games．
該句使用了who引導(dǎo)一個定語從句，those who…的那些人．
（高分句型二） If we don't put our hearts into our work，we might fail in the entrance examinations．Besides，if you get a computer and don't make full use of it，it's just a waste of money．
該句使用了兩個if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，
連接詞使用較恰當，如Besides；So等．

解答 Dear editor，
     I'm a student of Senior One．（亮出觀點）1 don't think my parents should buy me a computer now．（高分句型一）Those who have computers in my class are spending too much time on computer games．In my opinion there are many other ways to enjoy myself than playing computer games．（高分句型二） If we don't put our hearts into our work，we might fail in the entrance examinations．Besides，if you get a computer and don't make full use of it，it's just a waste of money．So I insist they not buy me a computer now．Don't you agree？Yours
                                                                                                            Li Hua

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．