Question

據報道,我國學生近視率居世界第一。造成這一現象的原因是多方面的, 請你以 "Why are more and more children getting short-sighted?" 為題, 寫一篇英語短文。

內容主要包括：

1. 造成學生近視的原因；

2. 如何保護視力？

注意: 1.詞數120左右；

2.可以適當增加細節, 以使行文連貫；

3.短文的開頭已經寫好, 不計入總詞數。

參考詞匯:  近視率 rate of myopia

Why are more and more children getting short-sighted?

It is reported that the rate of myopia of Chinese students is ranked as the highest in the world _______________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version：

 Dear Li Hua,

I’ve just got your letter and I know learning a foreign language can be challenging for some people. However, there are many things you can do to overcome these difficulties.

    Firstly, obtain as large a vocabulary as possible. It is a good habit to do some reading every day and remember some typical sentences. Practice makes perfect. Therefore, doing enough exercises can definitely improve your listening and writing. In this way you are sure to improve your English.

    As for examination anxiety, it’s unnecessary for you to work too late before the exam. Instead, you’d better go to bed earlier than usual, otherwise you would feel tired the next day. It is also suggested that a jug of milk may help you get a sound sleep.

    In addition, consult your teachers if necessary.

    I do hope my advice is helpful to you.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關系，要求考生根據所給的寫作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開寫作。注意文章文體、人稱和時態。根據所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎充分發揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據情景的發展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如. there are many things you can do to overcome these difficulties、as large a vocabulary as possible、It is a good habit to do some reading 、you’d better go to bed earlier than usual還運用了虛擬語氣otherwise you would feel tired the next day ；以及主語從句It is also suggested that等。并注意了句子的銜接如：and、however、in addition、as for等等。層次分明，表達流暢。

考點：提綱作文。