Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。短文中有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（Λ），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

      2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Recently we have a hot discussion on if people should keep pets at home in cities or not.                             

Some students think it is a good idea to keep pets because of many old people living alone can get

comfort from them. Beside, getting along well with animals will make our life interested. On the

other hand, other students are against the idea. In their opinions, if too many people keep pets at

home, it’s bad to the environment. What is worse, pets may make too much noisy and even attack

people. I like animals, but I don’t think it bad to keep pets at home. But we must take measures to

keep them polluting our environment.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Recently we have∧ a hot discussion on if people should keep pets at home

                             had             whether

in cities or not. Some students think it is a good idea to keep pets because of many old people living alone can get comfort from them. Beside, getting along well with

Besides  

animals will make our life interested.

        interesting

 On the other hand, other students are against the idea. In their opinions, if too                                             opinion

many people keep pets at home, it’s bad to the environment. What ‘s worse, pets

for

may make too much noisy                                                             noise

and even attack people. I like animals, but I don’t think it bad to keep pets at

so

home. But we must

                              

 take measures to keep them ∧polluting our environment.

                           from

【解析】

 recently常與現在完成時連用，所以此處have后加had。

 介詞后表示“是否”是用whether。

 because后要接從句many old people living alone can get comfort from them。of后不可跟從句。

 besides 再者，而且。beside旁邊。

 修飾life用interesting；interested修飾人。

 in one’s opinion 在某人看來。

 be bad for 對……有害

 too much后接不可數名詞。

 前后是因果關系。

 keep sb from dong sth 阻止某人做某事