Question

假定你是李華，作為一名交換生（an exchange student）剛結(jié)束在英國為期一個(gè)月的學(xué)習(xí)。學(xué)習(xí)期間，你和房東Mr. Wilson 結(jié)下了深厚的友誼。請按下列要點(diǎn)給Mr. Wilson發(fā)一封郵件表示感謝：

1. 生活上的照顧；2. 學(xué)習(xí)上的幫助；3. 希望保持聯(lián)系。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 開頭語已為你寫好。

七彩教育網(wǎng) Mr. Wilson,

Time flies! I’ve been back home.

Best wishes, Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Mr. Wilson,

Time flies! I’ve been back home. How I miss the days we spent together! All I saw and experienced will be part of my memory. It was your help and kindness that made my study and life in the UK special and enjoyable.

Thanks to your help, I got used to the life there soon. I still miss the delicious meals you prepared for me. Besides, I really appreciate your patience while talking with me. It was a wonderful time for me to improve my spoken English.  And I also learned a lot about your country and the English culture.

I hope we can stay in touch with each other.  I am looking forward to your coming to China in the near future.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

【解析】本文是一位交換生給房東的一封信，表示感謝之情。文章包括三個(gè)方面，感謝對方生活上的照顧，學(xué)習(xí)上的幫助，以及希望和對方保持聯(lián)系。在寫作的過程總注意選詞，選擇一些合適的高級詞匯，同時(shí)也要使用一些高級的句型。同時(shí)也要選用一些合適的連詞讓文章更流暢。