Question

【題目】假設你是李華, Chris是你校的國際交流生。一年一度的高考升學季來臨了,他作為口語輔導小老師受某剛被錄取到北大的學生及其家人邀請,到他們家做客。但是,由于他不知道去中國人家里做客有哪些習俗,便給你發了一封電子郵件,請你根據下列要點,給他回復一封電子郵件,給他一些建議。要點如下:

1.到達時間；2.適當送一些禮物；3.介紹中國的餐桌禮儀。

注意:

1.詞數100左右(文章開頭和結尾已經給出,不計入總詞數)；

2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。

Dear Chris,

I have received your email of July 28. I am happy to hear that you, as a tutor of the graduate admitted to Beijing University this year, were invited to dinner at his home.

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I do wish your first Chinese home dinner an unforgettable experience.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Chris，

I have received your email of July 28. I am happy to hear that you, as a tutor of the graduate admitted to Beijing University this year, were invited to dinner at his home. In response to your concerns about how to be a guest in China, I'd like to offer my personal advice.

Firstly, you'd better arrive a little earlier than the expected dinner time to save more time for the graduate's family to prepare dinner. Secondly, gifts like a book or a pen are acceptable. If possible, you can also send him a “red packet” containing 666 RMB meaning “successful in everything”. Moreover, we Chinese often treat guests with delicious dishes. When at table, you shouldn't start eating first but follow the host or the senior guests. Sometimes, the host will help you to some dishes, and you can just show your appreciation and gladly have them, which will please them all.

I do wish your first Chinese home dinner an unforgettable experience.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求寫一封電子郵件。

第1步：審題。要求考生以李華的身份寫郵件，Chris是你校的國際交流生。一年一度的高考升學季來臨了,他作為口語輔導小老師受某剛被錄取到北大的學生及其家人邀請,到他們家做客。但是,由于他不知道去中國人家里做客有哪些習俗,便給你發了一封電子郵件,請你根據下列要點,給他回復一封電子郵件,給他一些建議。時態應為一般現在時為主。

第2步：確定要點：1.到達時間；2.適當送一些禮物；3.介紹中國的餐桌禮儀。

第3步：根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

范文內容完整，語言規范，語篇連貫，詞數適當。作者在范文中使用了較多高級詞匯，如be admitted to, in response to；使用了非謂語動詞containing 666 RMB meaning “successful in everything”...文章中使用了較多的串聯詞，如firstly，secondly，moreover；這些串聯詞有機地把各要點串聯成一個整體。全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉換自然，為文章增色添彩。