Question

“實行低碳經濟”，“過低碳生活”，現在已經成為了人們關注的熱門話題。最近，你們班的同學就這個話題展開了熱烈的討論。請你根據下表提供的信息，給21st century 寫篇文章，報道你們班級的討論情況。

為什么要“實行低碳經濟”	工廠排放有害物，人類活動產生大量二氧化碳，污染嚴重，環境惡化。 隨著人口的增長，自然資源將會耗盡
如何走“綠色發展道路”	植樹造林 回收和利用廢棄物 開發新能源
過低碳生活如何“從我做起”	（聯系自己擬定內容，至少列舉兩點）

注意：

對所給要點，逐一陳述，適當發揮，不要簡單翻譯。

字數150左右。開頭已經寫好，不計入總字數。

Nowadays, carrying out low carbon economy and living a low carbon life has been a hot topic. Recently our class had a heated discussion about it.

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Answer 1

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One Possible Version

Nowadays, carrying out low carbon economy and living a low carbon life has been a hot topic. Recently our class had a heated discussion about it.

Through the discussion, we are fully aware of the necessity of carrying out a low carbon economy in our country. Factories have been producing large numbers of harmful chemicals. Meanwhile, human activities also let off carbon gases. As a consequence, all these contribute a lot to serious environmental pollution.What’s worse, with the increase of the population, natural resources will run out.

My calssmates put forward the following suggestions about how to develop in a green way. First, more trees should be planted. Second, it is significant for us to recycle and reuse the waste that people throw away. Third, new energy should be developed and promoted as soon as possible.

We all think it is our duty to live a low carbon life. We are supposed to save every bit of water and electricity. Besides, we should appeal to the people around us to make contributions to creating a green homeland. We are confident that with our combined efforts, our life will make a great difference.

【解析】

試題分析：寫好提綱式作文的關鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關系，要求考生根據所給的寫作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開寫作。注意文章文體、人稱和時態。根據所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎充分發揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據情景的發展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。

【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如. carrying out low carbon economy and living a low carbon life has been a hot topic； contribute a lot to； are supposed to還運用了主語從句it is significant for us to recycle and reuse the waste that people throw away等。并注意了句子的銜接如：Meanwhile， As a consequence， First, Second, Third, Besides,  等等。

考點：提綱作文。