Question

假定你是是的業(yè)余氣象員李華，請(qǐng)你在晚上6∶00根據(jù)電臺(tái)天氣預(yù)報(bào)節(jié)目中得知的天氣情況，通過廣播用英語向全體學(xué)生作天氣預(yù)報(bào)，并提出忠告。要點(diǎn)如下表：

 

項(xiàng)目 時(shí)段	午夜—凌晨2∶00	明天早晨	上午
天氣情況	大風(fēng)、降溫5℃—8℃	陰有小雪	……
要求與忠告	離開教室時(shí)關(guān)好門窗；起床時(shí)多穿衣服，注意保暖，以防感冒。

注意：1．必須包括所給的要點(diǎn)，但不可逐條翻譯；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫

3. 詞數(shù)100左右。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

May I have your attention? please , everyone ? It’s now 6 o’ clock in the evening . Here is the weather report.

         There will be a strong wind from this midnight to two early tomorrow morning and the temperature will drop by 5℃—8℃ . It’s going to be cloudy and there may be light snowfalls tomorrow morning . Therefore , make surd that all the windows and doors are closed when you leave the classroom tonight in case they might be broken by the strong winds . You see , it’s getting colder and colder , so I’d like to remind you that you should put on more clothes when getting up the following morning to protect yourself from cold . That’s all Thank you a lot .

         Here’s Li Hua reporting .

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱式作文：這是廣播稿，要力求簡潔，考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。這篇作文的要點(diǎn)很細(xì)，以此為基礎(chǔ)充分利用自己所學(xué)只是，靈活運(yùn)用，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等

【亮點(diǎn)說明】It’s going to be cloudy and there may be light snowfalls tomorrow morning.這句話用了there be句型，Therefore, make sure that all the windows and doors are closed when you leave the classroom tonight in case they might be broken by the strong winds .這句話用了賓語從句，時(shí)間狀語從句和條件狀語從句，so I’d like to remind you that you should put on more clothes when getting up the following morning to protect yourself from cold .這句話用了狀語從句的省略式。

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類短文