Question

寫作

閱讀下面短文, 然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

Luck or hard work

　　Is it luck or hard work that brings success? The answer is “hard work”．One's efforts bring him success and not his luck．It is said, “Triumphs don't come without effort.”

　　Luck favors only those who help themselves．The harder you work, the luckier you get．A man works day and night giving up all his play and delight and moves ahead to earn success and when he earned it people called it luck．This excellence is in fact not luck, but result of a lot of hard work．Any idea cannot become a success unless we work hard on it．

　　Today we are leading a happy and comfortable life due to hard work of someone else．We have bulbs to remove the darkness in a room; this was possible by hard work of Edison．We chat over phone with our friends, enjoying which has resulted by the hard work put in by Alexander Graham Bell．

　　The world lifts its hats up to one who puts 50 percent of their efforts and on its head for those few soul who devote 100 percent thus．“Success accompanies only those who work hard and not the ones who hardly work.”

[寫作內(nèi)容]

(1)以約30個(gè)詞概括短文的要點(diǎn)；

(2)然后以120個(gè)詞就“成功是靠運(yùn)氣還是努力”這個(gè)主題發(fā)表你的看法，并包括如下要點(diǎn)：

1．人們對(duì)如何取得成功看法有哪些?

2．他們有何實(shí)例證明自己的觀點(diǎn)?

3．你的觀點(diǎn)如何?為什么?

[寫作要求]

(1)可以使用實(shí)例或其它論述方法支持你的論點(diǎn)，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

(2)標(biāo)題自定。

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Answer 1

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解析：

One possible version：

Good Luck Always Comes With Hard Work

　　It is hard work rather than luck that brings people success．Those who are considered to be successful must have been working hard to achieve their goal and their success can also benefit others．

　　Some people argue that one can not succeed unless he works very hard．There are many examples to show that success comes from hard work．One example is that Madam Curie had been working all day and all night before she made the great discovery of radium．

　　Other people think that luck and opportunity are more important than hard work．They argue that even if one works hard, he can not succeed without luck and opportunity．For instance, a film star, Zhang Ziyi, could never be famous if she was not given a chance to play a role in the film．

　　I think that both hard work and good luck are important．If one wants to be successful, he has to work hard on one hand and he has to seize the opportunity and luck on the other．These two factors are essential for one's success．

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