Question

據世界衛生組織（WHO）統計，每年有200萬人死于吸煙，60萬人死于二手煙。為此，我國規定，從今年5月1 日起，嚴禁在公共場所吸煙。請你結合下面所給要點，以“Saying No to Smoking”為題，談談吸煙的危害。

1. 吸煙有害；

2. 吸煙導致咳嗽、肺癌等疾病；

3. 吸煙影響青少年成長；

4. 二手煙同樣有害；

5. 你的態度：面對別人吸煙、給煙怎么辦？

注意： 1. 詞數：100詞左右； 2. 應覆蓋所有要點；可適當增加細節，使行文連貫；3. 參考詞匯：lung cancer肺癌; secondhand smoke二手煙

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Saying No to Smoking

　　According to the WHO，2 million people died from smoking and 600 thousand from secondhand smoke every year. So smoking is banned in China in all public places both inside and outside from May 1 on.

As is known to all, smoking is bad for people’s health. It may cause many diseases such as cough, lung cancer and so on. Smoking is especially harmful to us teenagers because our bodies are still growing. Secondhand smoke does harm to us as well. So we must do something to keep away from smoking. If someone offers a cigarette, we should refuse it. And if anyone smokes nearby, we should try to stop it. From now on, everyone of us should follow the law and say no to smoking.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。

考點：提綱類作文

點評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。