Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的英文短詩(shī)，展開(kāi)適當(dāng)?shù)南胂螅瑢?xiě)一篇短文。
標(biāo)題為：My Teacher Mr Moore
There’s a teacher Mr .Moore.
Who is lovely and thirty-four.
Always encouraging us to try.
He leads us to a world of “why”.
We all admire him more and more.
注意：
1.不得照抄短詩(shī)原文。
2.必須結(jié)合短詩(shī)的內(nèi)容，發(fā)揮想象，適當(dāng)展開(kāi)。
3.必須突出短詩(shī)的主題，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語(yǔ)意連貫。
4.短文不能寫(xiě)成詩(shī)歌形式。
5.詞數(shù)：120左右。

Answer 1

Of all my teachers, Mr. Moore is the one who impresses me most. Though he is 34,he looks very young for his age. And he’s one of the most popular teachers in our school.
Compared with other teachers ,Mr. Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching .He tries various ways to make his classes lively and interesting .In his opinion, we should not only know “what”, but also understand “why”. So ,instead of giving us answers immediately ,he encourage us to think by ourselves whenever he puts forward questions. With his help. we’ve learned how to analyze and settle problem. What a wonderful world of “why” he leads us to!
He is such a learned person that we all admire him very much

試題分析：這是一篇半開(kāi)放式的作文，考生在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意短詩(shī)的重心，切忌偏題，詩(shī)主要是對(duì)這個(gè)老師進(jìn)行了描述，考生要緊緊抓住這些特點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)展開(kāi)自己的想象，結(jié)合生活學(xué)習(xí)中老師的特點(diǎn)。在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中注意句型的多樣化和連接詞的使用。要求考生用地道的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，要求觀點(diǎn)明確，駕馭語(yǔ)言的能力強(qiáng)，選擇詞匯的時(shí)候要選擇相對(duì)高級(jí)的詞匯，也要運(yùn)用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達(dá)文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實(shí)現(xiàn)同樣的目的。在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞把要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來(lái)，使文章成為一個(gè)整體。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：開(kāi)放式作文難就難在沒(méi)有要點(diǎn)，給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地大，但也增加了難度，有的考生會(huì)覺(jué)得無(wú)話可說(shuō)，這時(shí)可以充分利用所給的首句，展開(kāi)陳述，但要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，句式選擇要富有變化。