Question

16．假設你是晨光中學的學生會主席李津．一批來自英國的高中生與你校學生開展了為期兩周的交流活動．現在，他們即將回國，你將在歡送會上致辭．請根據以下提示寫一篇發言稿．
（1）回顧雙方的交流活動（如學習、生活、體育、文藝等方面）；
（2）談談收獲或感情；
（3）表達祝愿語期望．
注意：
（1）詞數不少于100；
（2）可適當加入細節，是內容充實、行文連貫；
（3）開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數．
Dear friends，
How time flies!
          ．
Thank you．

Answer 1

分析 題目要求寫一篇發言稿．人稱為第一人稱為主．時態以一般過去時和一般現在時為主．寫作要點為：1，回顧；2，談收獲和感想；3，表達祝愿．
重要詞語和短語：
get close to…接近…
enjoyable 令人愉快的
benefit 有利于…
enable 使…可以
promote the friendship 促進友誼
the exchange program 交流項目
on behalf of 代表…
高分句型：
句型一：
It has been two weeks since①you came to our school for the exchange program，which②has benefited all of us．
①since后加上一個時間點（具體時間/事件），表示"自從…以來"．
②由which引導的非限制性定語從句，先行詞為the exchange program，which在從句中充當主語．
句型二：
We have studied in the same classroom and lived in the same dormitory，which has enabled us to know each other better．
which引導的非限制性定語從句，先行詞為前面一個句子的內容，which在從句中充當主語．
句型三：
What①impresses us most is your art skills，in which②you showed outstanding talent．
①由what引導的主語從句，what為連接代詞，what impresses us most為主語．
②由介詞+which引導的非限制性定語從句，先行詞為your arts skills，還原句子可以是，you showed outstanding talent in your art skills．你通過藝術的方式展示了你出色的天賦．

解答 Dear friends，
How time flies!
    It is getting close to the end of the communication activities which proved to be great and enjoyable．It has been two weeks since you came to our school for the exchange program，which has benefited all of us．【高分句型一】
    During the past two weeks，we have studied in the same classroom and lived in the same dormitory，which has enabled us to know each other better．【高分句型二】Doing the same sports on the playground gives us the opportunity to promote our friendship．What impresses us most is your art skills，in which you showed outstanding talent．【高分句型三】We believe that the students in our school have learned a lot from the exchange program．（回顧和感受）
    At last，on behalf of all the students in our school，I wish you will have a safe and happy journey home and that there will be more programs like this in the future．（表達祝愿）
    Thank you．

點評 考生在寫作時需明確寫作要點，注意寫作中人稱和時態的使用，做到思路清晰，句式靈活，表達流暢．考生在平時應多注意常考的作文形式，積累相關的短語和詞匯．