Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

      2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

 Dear Editor,

I’m the boy student in a key middle school in our city. I fond of play the piano. It is known by us that the college entrance examination is approaching. I must get good prepared for it. So I have only fifteen minutes to play the piano on every day. I don’t want to give up my favorite, and my parents forbade me to continue playing it. They think it a waste of time to do it now. How do you think of it? Could you give me some advices on how to deal with the problem? I am looking forward to your early reply.

Thank you.

John

Answer 1

Dear Editor,

I’m the boy student in a key middle school in our city. I∧ fond of play the piano. It is known by

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us that the college entrance examination is approaching. I must get good prepared for it. So I have

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only fifteen minutes to play the piano on every day. I don’t want to give up my favorite, and my

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parents forbade me to continue playing it. They think it a waste of time to do it now. How do you

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think of it? Could you give me some advices on how to deal with the problem? I am looking

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forward to your early reply.

Thank you

                                                       John