Question

某英文報紙要舉行征文比賽，題目是“My Idea of Future Life”。請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容要點，用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文來展望未來的新生活。可以合理想象，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)。
內(nèi)容提示：

交通	干凈、快捷和安全；電腦控制小轎車
商業(yè)	網(wǎng)上購物；集娛樂與購物于一身的購物中心
醫(yī)學(xué)	治病方式改變；基因用于治療疾病
教育	……

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My Idea of Future Life
                                                                              
                                                                               

Answer 1

My Idea of Future Life
What will life be like in the future? I think transportation will become cleaner, faster and safer. Cars will be controlled by computers. As for business, online shopping will become more and more popular. People may also go to a mall which combines shopping with fun. With the development of medicine, the way diseases are treated will be changed and genes may be used as a cure. Distance education will help people study whenever they have time and wherever they may be, so it will be more convenient for personal study.
In a word , I’m sure our future life will become far better than today.

解析試題分析：本文屬于提綱類作文，要點基本上都給了出來，考生自己發(fā)揮的余地不大，只需要翻譯即可。在列舉未來生活的時候，請務(wù)必要使用連接詞把各個要點連接起來，如firstly, secondly等，讓文章成為一個整體。在方便個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語讓文章更有文采。
考點：考查提綱類作文
點評：提綱類作文的關(guān)鍵是把握所有的要點，不要遺漏，要使用合適的連接詞來連接上下文，使之成為整體，高級詞匯高級句型的利用讓文章不要那么平淡，富有變化。