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6．"When should I begin to develop good habits？"a young boy asked his teacher．
"How old are you？"asked the teacher．
"Eight years old，sir．"answered the boy．
"Then you have just lost eight years，"the teacher replied．
There is no doubt that habits are formed at a very early age．When one is young，it is easy to gain good habits．
Good habits are practices that help us in our daily life．The habit of brushing one's teeth in the morning，for example，keeps one's teeth clean and prevents a bad smell which is unpleasant to others．Bad habits such as sticking one's tongue out，biting one's fingernails and picking one's nose，are unwelcome ways of behaving in front of others．If we want people to enjoy being with us，we should try to develop habits that are pleasant．
The habits we formed at an early age shape our character．Habits are like tributaries （細流） which flow into a river．The river is made up of all its tributaries； a person's character is made up of all habits that he or she has developed over the years．
【寫作內容】
1、以約30個詞概括本文內容；
2、以約120個詞談談你對好習慣養成的看法，并包括以下要點：
（1）你認為好習慣重要嗎，為什么？
（2）你身上有好習慣嗎？
（3）怎樣才能養成良好的習慣？
【寫作要求】
1、作文中可以使用親身經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子．
2、作文中不得出現真實姓名和學校名稱．
The author tells us that habits are formed when we are young and we should try to develop good habits，for they benefit us in our daily life and help us shape our character（高分句型一）．（34 words）
I can't agree more with the author．A good habit can shape our character and improve our inner beauty．Therefore，I think it is of great significance to form a good habit．I have benefited much from my good habits，such as getting up early to read English aloud，reviewing lessons before going to bed every day．In the past，I didn't dare to speak English before others because of my poor pronunciation．I often did badly in my English tests．Thanks to my good habits，I have been making great progress．
Then，how can we form a good habit？Firstly，we should decide to fight against our laziness．Once we make up our minds to do something，never give up easily．Then，we have to be confident，believing we can become better．Last but not least，keep pushing ourselves．It may take a long period to form a good habit，but remember it is perseverance that makes us successful!（高分句型二）．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據關鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡3． 準確定位人稱、時態．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
The author tells us that habits are formed when we are young and we should try to develop good habits，for they benefit us in our daily life and help us shape our character
作者告訴我們，習慣是在我們年輕的時候形成的，我們應該養成良好的習慣，因為它們有益于我們的日常生活，有助于我們塑造我們的性格．
高分句型二：
It may take a long period to form a good habit，but remember it is perseverance that makes us successful!．
讓自己可以養成良好的習慣需要很長的時間，但記住它是毅力讓我們成功．

解答 The author tells us that habits are formed when we are young and we should try to develop good habits，for they benefit us in our daily life and help us shape our character（高分句型一）．（34 words）
    I can't agree more with the author．A good habit can shape our character and improve our inner beauty．Therefore，I think it is of great significance to form a good habit．I have benefited much from my good habits，such as getting up early to read English aloud，reviewing lessons before going to bed every day．In the past，I didn't dare to speak English before others because of my poor pronunciation．I often did badly in my English tests．Thanks to my good habits，I have been making great progress．
    Then，how can we form a good habit？Firstly，we should decide to fight against our laziness．Once we make up our minds to do something，never give up easily．Then，we have to be confident，believing we can become better．Last but not least，keep pushing ourselves．It may take a long period to form a good habit，but remember it is perseverance that makes us successful!（高分句型二）

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎進行思維和聯想，自由發揮．不僅考查學生在內容、結構安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學生的想像力、發散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．