Question

17．用英文介紹你最難忘的一次旅行．請以The Best Journey of My Life為題，寫一篇120詞左右的短文．提示：
1Where did you go and how to get there？
2What did you see and do there？
3What do you think of the journey？

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇介紹最難忘的一次旅行的作文．根據題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般過去時態．內容包括：一點明主題；二旅行的地點，活動以及感受．
高分句型：
1．It was two years ago that I went there with my friends．句子里It was 和that 根據強調句式，強調時間狀語two years ago．
兩年前我和朋友去那里．
2．It was my first time that I had tasted the Crossing Bridge Noodles．句子里用了固定句式It was my first time that 表示"某人第一次做某事"．
這是我第一次品嘗過橋米線．

解答 I have been to many places，such as，Beijing，Shanghai，Hongkong，Dalian and so on．But the best journey of my life is the trip to Yunnan．（點明主題）It was two years ago that I went there with my friends．【高分句型一】It took us about three hours to fly from Beijing to Kunming．We visited Kunming，Dali and Lijiang．We climbed the West Mountain and the Jade Dragon Mountain．We visited the Stone forests and the Flower Market．We were so exciting about the beautiful scenery．We had never seen such a beautiful place with the mild climit．People there were friendly and food there were delicious．It was my first time that I had tasted the Crossing Bridge Noodles【高分句型二】So we would never forget this trip．（旅行的地點，活動以及感受）．

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