Question

你的生日快到了，父親許諾將送你一份生日禮物。下面就是這份特殊禮物的描述。請(qǐng)你以“Father’s Gift for My Birthday”為題，用第一人稱講述這個(gè)故事。要點(diǎn)如下：
1．上周五早晨，父親帶我到家鄉(xiāng)的一所農(nóng)村學(xué)校；
2．唯一的教室里有21個(gè)學(xué)生，大多數(shù)是男生，教室小而昏暗(dim)；
3．雖然那兒條件很差很窮，但學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)努力，去年有兩個(gè)學(xué)生考上了大學(xué)；
4．你的感想，原來(lái)這就是父親給我的禮物……
注意：1．除要求的內(nèi)容外，可酌情自由發(fā)揮；2．詞數(shù)：100詞左右。

Answer 1

Father’s Gift for My Birthday
My birthday of this year fell on last Friday. My father promised to give me a special gift.
Last Friday morning, Father brought me to a village school in his hometown. The school had just one house with one classroom, which was small with dim light, and all the desks and chairs were made of rough boards. There were only 21 students, most of whom were boys. They were listening to the teacher attentively. The teacher told us, while their study conditions were poor, all the students studied very hard and two from the school even went to university last year.
I was deeply struck by their stories. Not until then did I realize that it was my father’s gift for my birthday!

解析1.本文體裁是記敘文；時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般過(guò)去式為主。
2.不要逐條翻譯，注意用各項(xiàng)內(nèi)容間的銜接。
3.“感想”要有度，不要發(fā)揮的太多。
4.注意運(yùn)用些教高級(jí)的表達(dá)方式，如：fall on；be made of，be deeply struck by及各種從句。