Question

短文改錯 （共10處錯誤，每改對1處1分，共10分）

Once there was boy. His mother was very fat but talked too much to him. He didn’t want his teachers and classmate to see her. Every time the parents’ meeting was held, he would ask a beautiful lady to attend it instead her. In return, she paid her 50 yuan each time. One day, he was serious ill and lost consciousness. So he sent to hospital by his teacher. Three days late he came back to life and got to know his mother had been looking after him all the time. He was so thankful that he cried and had told his mother how sorry he was for that he had done.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 boy 前加a

 but改為and;

 classmate改為 classmates

 instead 后加 of

  she 改為 he

 serious 改為 seriously

  sent 前加 was

 late 改為 later

 去掉told 前 had

 for后 that 改為 what

【解析】

試題分析：

 boy 是可數名詞，前加a，句意：從前有個男孩

 他媽媽很胖和他說話太多，是并列關系，不是轉折關系：but改為and;

 考查名詞：teachers是復數，classmate也應該改為 classmates

 instead是副詞，要是接賓語 后加 of

 根據句意應該是男孩每次付給他50塊錢，she 改為 he

 修飾形容詞ill應該是副詞seriously

 句意：他被老師送到醫院，用過去時的被動：sent 前加 was

 表示“幾天后”用a few days later

 和cried并列用過去時told

 for后面的賓語從句，從句中缺少賓語： that 改為 what

考點：考查短文改錯

點評：本題考查較為細致，要求考生要特別耐心答題中注意句子中人稱和數是否一致，時態是否一致。各種詞性之間的區別以及一些常用句型，固定短語的應用。一般的這類題型不會出現太復雜的單詞和句子，這類題型考察基礎知識較多。平時應注重積累，熟記一些句型及慣用結構。修改前先細讀短文，標出出錯的位置，改完以后還得細讀短文，看看改過后的短文是否語意通順，符合邏輯。