Question

根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)寫一篇報(bào)導(dǎo)給“長(zhǎng)江日?qǐng)?bào)”談?wù)勣r(nóng)村兒童失學(xué)的主要原因以及你的看法。
原因：
1．由于家庭貧窮，無力供其上學(xué)，不得不在家做工。
2．一些家長(zhǎng)認(rèn)為上學(xué)無用，不讓孩子上學(xué)。
3．有部分兒童對(duì)功課不感興趣，不思上學(xué)。
看法：
1．所有兒童都應(yīng)有受教育的機(jī)會(huì)。
2．整個(gè)社會(huì)都應(yīng)重視兒童教育，他們?cè)谖磥韲?guó)家建設(shè)中起重要的作用。
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詞數(shù)：120左右。
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Answer 1

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Possible version:
Dear editor，
In the countryside, a lot of children are leaving school for various reasons．On one hand, some families are too poor to send their children to school．So children have to earn money to support their families．On the other hand, some parents think it useless to send their children to school．They would rather let their children stay at home．Moreover, some of the children aren't interested in their lessons so they don't like to go to school．1 feel worried about this．As far as I am concerned, every child should have the chance to go to school．We should pay more attention to the education of children for they will play an important part in our socialist construction in the future．Ways must be found to prevent children from leaving off their studies.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文，且是寫一篇報(bào)導(dǎo)給“長(zhǎng)江日?qǐng)?bào)”談?wù)勣r(nóng)村兒童失學(xué)的主要原因以及你的看法，所以要用第一人稱來寫。需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文，一定要談?wù)勛约旱目捶āＰ枰�注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時(shí)注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)120左右，不要太多也不要太少。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。