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二．近來，有學生在校外租房而不愿住大寢室。請根據下面提示，一分為二地用英語寫一篇短文，說明兩者各自的好處和壞處，并表明自己的觀點。20分。
學習時間；
安全；
自由性；
與同學交往；
學習效果。
（注：開頭和結尾已經給出，不包含在5句話當中。）
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只能使用5個句子表達全部內容。句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章結構連貫。
Nowadays, some students would not like to live in a dorm .Instead, they rent houses outside the school. There are advantages and disadvantages for both.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________         So living or not living in dorm depends on your own need. Anyhow, as a student, I prefer living in a dorm.

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Nowadays, some students would not like to live in a dorm . Instead, they rent houses outside the school .There are advantages and disadvantages for both.
Living in a dorm can increase friendship and cooperation between classmates and of course it is safer.A dorm is more like a society, which enables students to learn to adapt to each other, thus preparing for the social life later .But sometimes it is a little noisy in dorm, and we are often disturbed each other when we are studying .As for renting houses to live alone, it's better for study as you can feel free in your own room without being interrupted by others, as a result of which, you can have more time and devote yourself to studying whole-hearty . But there may appear some safety problems as you live outside of the school.
So living or not living in dorm depends on your own need. Anyhow, as a student, I prefer living in a dorm.

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