Question

1．你校文學社向高三學生征文，請你以"How to Realize my Dream to University"為主題寫一篇短文．
寫作要點：
1．理想的大學和專業；
2．目前的做法；
3．未來的打算．
注意：
1．短文詞數不少于100詞；
2．可根據情況增減細節，詳略得當；
3．不能使用真實姓名和學校名稱．
How to Realize my Dream to University
I often imagine whatuniversity I will be admitted to next year．To behonest，I do hope I can go to Beijing Universityto learn economics which I've dreamed of since I was a child．
As a matter of fact，I haven't completely put my heart into all subjectssuch as Maths，Physics．I oftenwant to play games and don't listen to my teachers carefully in class． As a saying goes，"No pains，no gains"．I do knowif I really want to realize my dream to the university，I have to work hard at all subjects．
From now on，I amdetermined to make full use of my time，attendingmy class attentively，reading wildly，completing all the homework and doing sports to keephealthy．
I believe，only by working hard at all subjects can I make mydream come true．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文，根據所提供的材料，寫一篇征文．寫作要點包括：理想的大學和專業；目前的做法．寫作時應以一般現在時為主．人稱以第一人稱．重要短語：be admitted to…（被…錄取），to be honest （老實講），dream of （夢想），as a matter of fact…（事實上…），put one's heart into（用心投入），realize one's dream（實現某人的夢想），be determined to（下定決心做某事），make full use of （充分利用）．

解答 How to Realize my Dream to University
I often imagine whatuniversity I will be admitted to next year．To behonest，I do hope I can go to Beijing Universityto learn economics which I've dreamed of since I was a child．【高分句型】（理想的大學和專業）
As a matter of fact，I haven't completely put my heart into all subjectssuch as Maths，Physics．I oftenwant to play games and don't listen to my teachers carefully in class． As a saying goes，"No pains，no gains"．I do knowif I really want to realize my dream to the university，I have to work hard at all subjects．（目前的做法）
From now on，I am determined to make full use of my time，attending my class attentively，reading wildly，completingall the homework and doing sports to keep healthy．【高分句型】（未來的打算）
I believe，only by working hard at all subjects can I make mydream come true．（結尾---總結）

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內容是否包含了所有要點，并適當增加細節．寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．